Walking

Walking

A Poem by Mysty Rayn

I am pleased with where I know I should be.

Not so pleased with where I’ve been.

The direction I turned is wrong, but I keep walking.

Knowing I should turn around.

I keep walking.

Making where I’m going where I’ve been.

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

© 2008 Mysty Rayn


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oh those walks of life,really baffling,we go on one way ,we think its great where we are heading but it turns to be a very wrong move we took ,yet we are so stubborn we think we will make it some way ,till we find we find we are lost and never knowing the way back,its really hard to live i have always known that ,i know ,i know

Posted 16 Years Ago


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the big circle of life.. what goes around come around. What a ride

Posted 16 Years Ago


oh those walks of life,really baffling,we go on one way ,we think its great where we are heading but it turns to be a very wrong move we took ,yet we are so stubborn we think we will make it some way ,till we find we find we are lost and never knowing the way back,its really hard to live i have always known that ,i know ,i know

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well written! You show how you go back in a direction you already know; as if it were the only thing for you, when you do know better is up ahead on a different fork in the road. Makes me wonder what it is a bout a possible better that scares you. Peace kid.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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