Diamond

Diamond

A Poem by Mysty Rayn

Surrounded by comfort.

They say I am too good.

This is all I know.

They say I need so much more.

I am just me.

The say I light up a room.

I know no other way.

They say I deserve better.

This is where I was created.

They say I am worth so much.

I know nothing of worth.

They say I bring smile to others.

I just love to shine.

They say I am flawless.

I know where my flaws are.

 

A diamond in the rough?

 

Perhaps.

 

 

© 2008 Mysty Rayn


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oh yes they do say and i believe and you deny,so humble,they say you are a comfort and good and your smile lights up the room,say you are worth more,but you deny,you know how worth you are,they say you amile ,you return you just love to shine ,i know from simple words i read they are true in every word they said ,for you truely shine in every piece yoy write,every one counts a lot ,but you really count a lot and lots more ,you are more worthy than you think ,just love your writings,more and more

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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oh yes they do say and i believe and you deny,so humble,they say you are a comfort and good and your smile lights up the room,say you are worth more,but you deny,you know how worth you are,they say you amile ,you return you just love to shine ,i know from simple words i read they are true in every word they said ,for you truely shine in every piece yoy write,every one counts a lot ,but you really count a lot and lots more ,you are more worthy than you think ,just love your writings,more and more

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe this is like a coming of age poem as you start to see what others do... we are all diamonds in the rough we just need love to polish us up and make us shine... I really like this a lot.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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