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If you want me too....

 

 

I could be here.

I could lend an ear

or my shoulder.

I could be friend

or more.

 

If you want me to....

 

 

I would be your rock

your biggest fan.

I would not give advice

just let you speak.

 

If you want me too....

 

I'd take care of you

or help you take care of yourself.

I'd lend you my strength

or let you learn to be weak.

 

If you want me too....

 

 

For you I'd be all you need me to be.

I'd stretch myself to the limits.

I could crawl to the depths.

I would love you.

 

If you want me to....

Reviews

[alternative_be]

Very beautiful in its symplicity, honesty and last but least written with true, real love. While reading this, one gets the impression that you will not impose your love upon someone if it is not mutual, which is very important...
I like the reocurring 'if you want me too...'
It adds more power and sincerity to your poem.
I hope the one it is written for is able to appreciate it!

[bluessadmood]

these words are so wonderful i had to come back ,anyone who hears your words its like music ,like invitation,you say i will be everything you like ,everything you want me,what wonderful words i am ready to hear you ,to be your friend or more ,could give you a shoulder,would never dictate just listen to you,then these wonderful words...
I'd take care of you

or help you take care of yourself.

I'd lend you my strength

or let you learn to be weak.

i wonder who could resist such temptation to have a friend or love so pure so ready to give and never take,you really amaze me ,oh you could never know how thrilled i felt reading this,its so touching ,its so loving in world so cruel will even laugh at your words and at mine believing you ,but i do not laugh my dear ,actually you put some tears in my eyes,for i never saw such emotions like this,and yes i will say it again you are a dreamer come join this world of crazy people so they call us ,they belong to the realist world ,they think they are good but just look around you and see what mess they brought to reath ,oh i will keep dearming ,and i loved those strong dreamy words ,never heard the like before

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Now that is pure devotion... i think when you love someone this is how you should be and it should go both ways... your out our of emotions is strong and deep.

[LadyLove]

Beautiful outpouring of what love entails: The giving of self to the other. This is an honest poem of how much of you that person can have..though you never ask for yourself. True love is this way. When you love...you grow into one another in this way...and the give and take will come naturally. Love evolves so beautifully when it is real. Blessings to you kid!

[bluessadmood]

why i loved this so much ,its as if echoing my thoughts,love should be for free,its not for sale ,i would give it profusely even if i get exploited but if i am not then i am a king ,i have got something nobody has ,you said it wonderfully,you would drag any heart to love and dream of such great emotions you do not see these days,i tell you this ,you really touched me with this ,i wish i could lots more ,its like singing to my ears,and i feel so happy to hear those wonderful words