My Dearest Lover

My Dearest Lover

 

I have thought of you

            Each moment

                        Of each day

 

I have needed you

            Every moment

                        Of those days

 

Since we parted

 

It feels so good to set eyes on you again

So much I should say

 

Your smell

            Rejuvenates my spirit

 

Your hands

            Comfort my heart

 

Your eyes

See through my walls

 

Your soul

            Illuminates my darkness

 

Forgive me for not holding on

Holding on to you

With every ounce of my existence

Take me as I am

With all my faults

 

Know that I Love You

With every part of my being

Even if my being is imperfect

 

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

 

Reviews

[Jenny Davis]

This is such a beautiful, yet sad piece. I feel so alone and racked with regret while reading this...as I believe that is what this poem intended. It's like the old saying, "Don't know what you got till it's gone," however you have put your own personal feelings and vulnerability out here on the page...An EXTREMELY good poem, my friend :)

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Very beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Too Me]

Beautifully expressed emotions! You have painted a masterpiece with you words. *Lana*

[Deborah Shepard]

what alwasy comes from the ehart you have such a beautiful way of expression

amazing beauty

[The Dark Priest]

This was beautifully said; very, very powerful!

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

I could see this sent in a letter to the one you love. Wonder expression in heartfelt words. :-) Sharon

[John Stussy]

Amazing, beautiful, and just... Wow. You held such a tenderness in this poem, it was wonderful to read your emotions. Great job.

[BrightEyes]

often times it does ring true that we don't know what we have until it is gone. How fantastic when we get that second chance - with all the knowledge of hindsight!

[M Bacchus]

This is such an emotional piece, so deep and it touched my heart, wishing I were the recipient of such heartfelt love. The title itself says so much. This is beautiful... Mysty.
Michael

[Leo Gems]

This write is amazingly beautiful... It shows what the other's love for individual has done for her and in the same token, displays the individual's love for her lover and a simple request forgive her for any past mistakes to accept her for who she is.

Touching ink! ;p