My World

Let me whisk you away to a like of happiness.

A place where your pain will be set free.

Allow me to hold a piece of your baggage.

And open your eyes so you can see.

 

You don’t have to hurt the way that you do.

There isn’t pain in the embrace of my arms.

Replace the fake smile for something real.

No reason to put on the charm.

 

Warmth from my love will melt your frigid core.

Walls that you’ve built can come crashing down.

Open yourself up to me and my world.

For a real friend in me you’ve found.

 

I can’t erase your past.

Judge you I would never do.

I can’t save you from yourself.

I can only love you.

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

oh such sweet writing ,you offer everything my dear ,and i see you ask nothin in return,you make you ,you live in aspecial world of yours ,a world so marvellous i have never seen like,you say come to my happiness where there is no pain come to my emrace,and have no fear,smile a real smile not fake,open up and come to my world for you will find a real friend in me,come dont fear the past ,i do not care ,i will not judge,for i will only love you,what can i say such true and wonderful emotions ,i got addicted to your sweet dreamy writing,yes i have seen lots good here ,but you drive me to think the world is still great even if in dreams even if its not for real ,you mesmerize my senses when i read you ,you take whole control on me with your words and tell me yes this my not be so dreamy as i usually think ,you say the world is full of love though i coulfd find only little so i chose to dream ...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow this is amazing... yes when we love someone we must except them in whole, not only their good but also their past and all the crazy thing that may come with it for we are human and all have them...

Allow me to hold a piece of your baggage.
And open your eyes so you can see.

thats why I love those line so much... a wonderful poem of how true love should be.

[T]

You have such a beautiful compassionate heart, Mysty and it shines in your writings ... Beautiful heart offerings, sweet woman ... hugs