Take It

When I least expect it, you take my breath away.

When I’m not looking, you steal one more piece of my heart.

When I’m not hiding, you reach for my soul.

When I am down, you lift my spirit.

 

Take it.

Take all I have to give.

 

I know I shouldn’t trust you, but I do.

I know I shouldn’t like you, but I do.

I know I shouldn’t feel this way, but I do.

I know I shouldn’t….

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

I know I shouldn't trust you, but I do.
I know I shouldn't like you, but I do.
I know I shouldn't feel this way, but I do.
I know I shouldn't�.
what great words ,what true and sincere emotions i know i should not do anything good to you ,like i dont trust you,,dont like you ,never feel for you,but still i do thats me ,i just fell for you so no matter what ,so no matter what ,you can have it ,i just cant resist ,i love you a lot so you just have me all,you fascinate me with your words,different from everything else i read,very good

[lauren emily]

Love is very unexpected and surprising, but always worth it. Don't be afraid to let yourself go and give that person your heart; especially if this person seems different from the rest.

Nice work,
~Lauren

[LadyLove]

I did! And I'm the happiest woman on earth for it. Just give a chance to chance. Nomatter what!
Be happy!

[Colleen C Dunphy]

Beautiful.
I feel the same way.
I love the simplicity of it and the bareness of it.
It is the rawness of what is beautiful about falling in love.

Best,
Lee

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love can be quite a surprise and make you do things your normally wouldn't, I love the simple beauty of this piece.

[soulsearching]

take it , i like it

[Bonnie]

Unusual and I like it!

There is a depth of meaning here. The contrasts create a very interesting poem.

[shiloh jennings]

Nothing else matters,
When I see your smile.
Nothing else matters,
When your touch reaches my grasp.
Nothing else matters,
Time and space fade away.
Nothing else matters,
But for you and you and you & me.

I'd give the world away, trade it in a moment
for your kiss.
I'd give my life away, trade it in a flash
to save yours.
I'd give my soul to you, boxed, bundled and bound,
if you'd take it.

Nothing else matters,
When I look into your eyes.
Nothing else matters,
When I'm next to you.
Nothing else matters,
History crashes the future to the ground.
Nothing else matters,
But for you and you and you & me.

I'd give my blood, my breath and my strength
to entwine with you.
I'd give my muse, my script, and my joy
for one moment more with you.
I'd give and I'd give and I know that you'd take
if only you'd notice me.

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written on the spot, inspired by your poem .. thanks for that! your piece is amazing.

[Pink Poison]

Boy can I relate. Great job. The poem is beautiful, keep it as it is.

[Laura E. Aranda]

Tragically Beautiful
It was an easy relishing read and I am glad I found it....but I like all your work! haha
Sorry I have not been online lately to come by and say Hi
Take care and keep writing
This one was a fun breez read......cheers, lea