Amlee
A Poem by
Mysty Rayn
For my little girl
You are my angel.
My saving grace.
My love, my heart.
My heaven in this place.
You are my sun.
My blue sky.
My flower, my tree.
My sparkling ocean tide.
You are my friend.
My playmate.
My punky, my girl.
My true belief in fate.
-Mysty Rayn
© 2008 Mysty Rayn
Reviews
Thats is absloutly such a touching and sweet poem to your daughter... it's always nice to read about the love of a parent.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Very touching! Rich images and filled with lightness and fun.
What a lovely way to honor your daughter. Mother's love is fantastic.
I'm sure you cherish her, and are grateful she is in your life.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Very touching! Rich images and filled with lightness and fun.
What a lovely way to honor your daughter. Mother's love is fantastic.
I'm sure you cherish her, and are grateful she is in your life.
Kudos. Nice little ode to your daughter. One thing I would think about though (and it is probably just me), that last line doesn't sound right. Makes it sound like something you can't control or didn't necessarily want. Perhaps change "fate" to "faith" or something of that nature. Just a thought. Kudos and enjoy your "blue sky". :)
Posted 16 Years Ago
Kudos. Nice little ode to your daughter. One thing I would think about though (and it is probably just me), that last line doesn't sound right. Makes it sound like something you can't control or didn't necessarily want. Perhaps change "fate" to "faith" or something of that nature. Just a thought. Kudos and enjoy your "blue sky". :)
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Added on August 9, 2008
Last Updated on August 9, 2008