Amlee

Amlee

A Poem by Mysty Rayn
"

For my little girl

"

 

You are my angel.

My saving grace.

My love, my heart.

My heaven in this place.

 

You are my sun.

My blue sky.

My flower, my tree.

My sparkling ocean tide.

 

You are my friend.

My playmate.

My punky, my girl.

My true belief in fate.

 

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

© 2008 Mysty Rayn


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Thats is absloutly such a touching and sweet poem to your daughter... it's always nice to read about the love of a parent.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very touching! Rich images and filled with lightness and fun.

What a lovely way to honor your daughter. Mother's love is fantastic.

I'm sure you cherish her, and are grateful she is in your life.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Kudos. Nice little ode to your daughter. One thing I would think about though (and it is probably just me), that last line doesn't sound right. Makes it sound like something you can't control or didn't necessarily want. Perhaps change "fate" to "faith" or something of that nature. Just a thought. Kudos and enjoy your "blue sky". :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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