As One

We just are

Two people

Existing

Living

Breathing

Hearts beating

Once alone

Now together

As one

Living

Existing

Two people

We just are

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

 

Reviews

[MorganLyn]

ooo. me likey lol.

the style is quite enjoyable and your message is wonderful. When two different separate people come together as one..

loved it :)
God Bless

-M

[Bonnie]

Cute -- I like the way the first 4 lines reflect back in the last 4 lines!

Content is quite rich in few words, my favorite style!

There is a depth of meaning and a nice rhythm.

I like it!