Far and Few

A man without eyes

A soul incomplete

A heart absent

Claiming defeat

 

So much left to give

Offerings of plenty

You’re giving in too soon

My heart it has pity

 

Allow me to save you

To reach out my hand

I will not judge

Or try to understand

 

I’ll just be a friend

Whenever you need

I would never push

If you don’t want to proceed

 

I just exist

Similar to you

But people like us

Are far and few

 

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

 

Reviews

[Save the Trees, Save th..]

wow this is intense and awesome i really love the emotion put in it

[Pointblank]

This makes it all to clear that when you give of yourself good things happen. When others see the light hiding beneath someone it is so wonderful when you can help them shine. This is as good as it gets.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow this is so amazing, yes love of a true friendship is unconditional... you said it with such grace and beauty.

[Wicahpi]

[The Spaniard]

Apparently people like you ARE far and few.

"Allow me to save you
To reach out my hand
I will not judge
Or try to understand"

The only people who claim they want to save me think they can help by sympathizing and telling me I shouldn't feel a certain way. when they DON'T understand they think they do. Obviously this hit close to me and I enjoyed it. Look forward to reading more.

[Wolfwind Words]

I liked this! I could relate to the words as they rolled down the page. The emotions and images brought the very essence of this piece into my mind and very soul.

Many times i felt just this. a sense of limbo.

Great Write!
Aaron Maycroft

I feel I should point out that "To reach out me hand" is technically incorrect; it should be "to reach out my hand".

[Angel's Lady]

How sweet! And what a wonderful thought behind the words. Nicely done!

[soulsearching]

Longing for love is what I see in this, but holding back to who would make the decision for a relationship, not wanting hurt is the danger

once again loved it.

[Bonnie]

Nice! It flows well and has a good message.

A gentle friend who does not push, that is a gift.

Good job!