Take Me Away

Take Me Away

 

Take me away

Take me with you

Let’s start over

Somewhere new

 

Take our children

Let them run

Play together

Under the sun

 

Start or world

Where we both smile

Enjoy each other

Laugh for a while

 

We deserve this

We’ve waited so long

Why should we wait

We’ve been so strong

 

You complete my life

My spirit, my soul

You’ve filled my heart

Where it once had a hole

 

I miss you too much

With each days end

Another can’t pass

Without my best friend

 

 

            -Mysty Rayn

 

Reviews

[Robert Erickson]

very sweet , a few spelling errors tho,
"Take our children,
let THEM run"
"start OUR world"
"a while" is two words
"Where it once had a hole"
would sound better as
"where there once was a hole"

hope this helps!!!!