My Heart is Still Breaking

I watch you from afar

Our differences a world apart

But still I love you

 

I know I can’t be with you

We don’t belong together

But I still need you

 

I realize you’re not mine

You belong to someone else

But I still think of you

 

I can’t hold back my feelings

You know how I feel

But I still keep telling you

 

I hope for a happy ending

I know that it will never be

But I still can’t let you go

 

I hold you in my heart

And it brings me peace

But my heart is still breaking

 

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

 

Reviews

[QuietPoet]

This was great. Very heartbreaking.. You emotions came out so well. I loved it.

[JadedSparrow]

This entire piece was disconcertigly true in regards to my life right now, though its booze and not another person that has taken my love from me. Extrememly well written. I loved it from start to finish.
JadedSparrow

[universalove]

THEY SAY LOVE THE ONE U WITH CAUSE U CAN`T HAVE EVERTHING U SEE OR WANT. JUST SOMETIMES IT WORKS OUT FOR THE BEST. I ENJOYED THE POEM.

[John Stussy]

The heart seems to keep holding on despite pains it undergoes. Well written.

[Donald Cole]

smooth. the processing of all the feelings, categorically. This is well written, obviously a reality and draws on emotion to feed other emotion, sad, not bad, not good. a level of acceptance. very nice
always,
Don

[Reeses]

I loved this writing.It was sad but it said all the thoughts i'm having that i can't say. Reading this has uplifted me knowing that I'm not the only one deteriorating from the lack of love.This made me stronger "for today." Thank you. ~Reeses~

[closed account]

Very sweet and sad, it is so sad to say goodbye, your mouth says it but your heart does't understand..

[Sapphire.Diamond]

this is amazing.
i understand it completely
any girl could relate..
one of my favorites..

[distefano 401]

so sad, and beautifully written. good idea to use "but i still..." at the end of the stanzas and then end it with "but my heart is still breaking."