Bad Day

Just a description of those "every-so-often" days I've had. :)

Bad Day

 

Today was a bad day….

 

Every task irreparable

Every thought unobtainable

Every mistake irreversible

Every direction unacceptable

Every lie irrefutable

Every look inadequate

Every minute irreversible

 

Today was a bad day….

 

-Mysty Rayn

 

 

Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Well written poem. Hopefully tomorrow will be a better day for you. Prayers to you. Debileah

[Lewis Findley]

Have a better 1 2 - morrow

[Bonnie]

I've had those kind of days too.

You did well in your description of it.

Nice rhythm.

[Last Lying Look]

Yeah. I know exactly what you mean. Good poem.

[John Stussy]

Those days suck when they come about. Captured them perfectly.

[Pharmacy]

I love this. And I can agree on every statement!!