Perfect

Oh she is so perfect

that's what they say .

She never defy rules

whatever price to pay.

They often wonder

why she never question?

They then think it

as part of her perfection.

She don't raise her voice 

she is so polite.

This is what they say

they think that's right.

She does everything 

she is asked to do.

She always looks happy

that must be true.

But they fail to see

the sadness in her eyes.

Sitting in desolation

trying to muffle her cries.

But how could they tell?

She is so PERFECT she hides so well.

Putting up a mask is such an art.

oh she was trained to play the part.

Reviews

[Troy Henson]

Deception is played so well by some that even the best of us are fooled.

Nicely written

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh yes.. Putting up a mask of something which you aren't a part of is indeed an art.. Its called the art of deceiving... I liked the concept here.. Nice reading it :)

[iamshadowine]

"Putting up a mask is such an art.
oh she was trained to play the part."
wow! This poem is PERFECT! so beautifully written!
keep writing :D