Nothing Matters Anymore

Something I wrote a long time ago when I was in middle school.

Depression and confusion
Stumbling over and over
Nothing matters anymore
Knocking down walls
Covering up past mistakes
Everything annoys me
I need to take a break
Been running so long
Can't hardly take life
I'm not important
Nothing matters anymore
Wishing I could live
Knowing I can't
Ignore the pain
Life is full of death
But I wont regret this
I'll take the next step
Nothing matters anymore

Author's Note

Any comments or suggestions would be appreciated. Thanks!

Reviews

[DarkBeauty]

I thought it had a good flow with your word choice to convey the message of the write great job

[DarkBeauty]

sounds great, last stanza taking the next step, nothing matters anymore- word choice is great but a little confussing for me if your taking the step to what? nothing matters anymore? i can comprehend on a certan level. But over all nice job with conveying the message across in your writing!! Keep penning!!!

[MystiqFairy]

Taking the next step refers to suicide in this poem. Thanks for taking the time to read!

[DarkBeauty]

Any time-will read more!!

[Wonderful Letdown]

"Can't hardly take life" should be "CAN hardly take life"

Besides that, no other mistakes.

It's a very powerful poem. You can feel how weary the person has become with life.

Very well written!!

[MystiqFairy]

Thanks for helping with the wording and taking the time to read my poem!

[Wonderful Letdown]

Anytime!!

[Robin Thomas]

very personal -- nicely written

[MystiqFairy]

Thanks!