You

You thrust your twisted knife of honesty
And you cut my battered wrists so deep
You drug me with pure yet tainted jealousy
And you hold me until I peacefully sleep
You intrigue me with your childish curiosity
And you force it upon me so that it's the only thing I keep
You drive me away with your extreme velocity
And you push me to the end of the ledge until I leap
You weave your enchanting web of intricacy
And you watch as the consequences of your actions I reap
You saturate me with your intense animosity
And you torture my body, soul, and spirit until I weep

Author's Note

I am not a very good writer and I would appreciate any kind of help or comments. Thank you!

Reviews

[Poem for Your Sprog]

Very personal and powerful. It really makes you think. Good job!

[MystiqFairy]

Thanks for reading!

[Wonderful Letdown]

Wow, very powerful wording and images. It kind of feels angry to me (that's not a bad thing)!!! VERY well done!!!

[MystiqFairy]

Yeah I was very angry when I wrote it and it bled through. Thanks for reading!

[Robin Thomas]

wOW JUST WOW This is fabulous!!!

[MystiqFairy]

Thank you! ; )

[Lexi]

That was really good, I know that anybody who thought that was bad must be insane.

[MystiqFairy]

Thank you very much!