Daniel

Feelings about lost love...

Please reach out to me
Let me know that you still want this
Please just notice me
Let me know that I'm not imagining this

The love that I've all ways felt for you is withering away
If you really love me please do something to convince me to stay
It's only your devotion and attention that I crave

Please tell me you still want me
Let me know that you still need this
Please just embrace me
Let me know that I'm not losing this

The love that I've all ways felt for you has withered away
If you really loved me. you would have convinced me to stay
It was only your devotion and attention that I craved

Author's Note

I'm not good with grammar or the technical part of writing. Any help would be appreciated!

Reviews

[Robin Thomas]

I like it very much

[MystiqFairy]

Thanks!

[Wonderful Letdown]

You spelled "always" wrong. Besides that, it's really good. I can feel the longing and pain in your words. Wanting so desperately for something, but never getting what you need. Very heart wrenching. Good job!!

[MystiqFairy]

Thank you! I wasn't sure if I should post this one. I didn't think people would understand cause it was so personal. I'm glad you took the time to read it!

[Wonderful Letdown]

I'm surprised you think people wouldn't understand this, because at some time or another, I'm pretty sure we all feel this way about at least one relationship in our lives.

This poem really hits home for me, it reminds me of what my parents went through before they split.

Remember, you may feel like the only one who's gone through a certain situation...but someone out there has too. You aren't alone!!

Again, good job on writing it.

[MystiqFairy]

Thanks so much!