Simply Me
A Poem by
Jemma
Me in few words....
I am no shell
I’m not empty or hollow
I don’t act to conform
I do not follow
I stand on my own
I stand with my pride
Refusing to budge
And refusing to hide
I’ll fight for my rights
And for what I believe
To give into the world
I just cannot conceive
So take a step back
And step around
Because I will not fault
To me I am bound
© 2010 Jemma
Author's Note
Simply Me....
Reviews
The title is fitting with each line being succinct in flow. As a whole it speaks of strength of will and seems to do so without being trite.
Well done
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
proud and strong you be... simply thee!! Love the write and your strength conveyed within.
Posted 14 Years Ago
proud and strong you be... simply thee!! Love the write and your strength conveyed within.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I will not fault means i wont fault within myself. I wont change who I am. And I wont change because others tell me to do so. The last line To me I am bound. Means I am true to myself. I am me and thats all I need to be.
Posted 14 Years Ago
I will not fault means i wont fault within myself. I wont change who I am. And I wont change because others tell me to do so. The last line To me I am bound. Means I am true to myself. I am me and thats all I need to be.
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The first stanza works perfectly, I am not sure if it is just me but the final 2 lines are not computing it may be an error or I might just be dumb
Posted 14 Years Ago
The first stanza works perfectly, I am not sure if it is just me but the final 2 lines are not computing it may be an error or I might just be dumb
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
You already know i LOVE this!!! and not just because of what you wrote to me on facebook!! I love it because it shows how strong you are!
smiles, hugs, luv ya!!
k
Posted 14 Years Ago
You already know i LOVE this!!! and not just because of what you wrote to me on facebook!! I love it because it shows how strong you are!
smiles, hugs, luv ya!!
k
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Great job. Gotta stay true to yourself.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Great job. Gotta stay true to yourself.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
wow this is really nice. i think this is a really good poem about expressing yourself. awesome
Posted 14 Years Ago
wow this is really nice. i think this is a really good poem about expressing yourself. awesome
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on March 19, 2010
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Jemma Hells Gates, Australia
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