Chapter 1: The Day everything changed

This is my first time sharing it. please tell me how it goes...no mean comments please. The girl's name is mystery. Just to hide my identity.

Nurse: Do you remember were you are?

Mystery: Yea....I'm in a hospital. 

( Mystery looks around at her mom and dad to the right side of her hospital bed. She looks to the left and sees the devices hooked up to her)

Nurse: Do you remember what happened?

Mystery: Yea....I tried to commit suicide.

(Mystery looks down)

*****7 YEARS EARLIER******

My mom and dad are arguing. I am only 6 years old and it scares me because dad's voice gets big and scary. He is really tall as it is so I can't help but cry. Dad is 6 foot something but mom is only 5'2. I wonder is she scared as much as I am. The yelling can be heard through the closed door. My room is right next to there room and the yelling is piercing my ear. All of a sudden I hear mom scream, "Devil get off of me. I can't breathe." I watch as my brother runs next door to call the neighbors to call for help. He screams for me to come with him but I can't just leave my mom with him. I can't. I bust into the room and start banging on devil's back. He has put mom, Angel, in a headlock and is on top of her body suffocating her. I am banging on his back hitting him as hard as I can to get him off. She is screaming " Devil get off of me, I can't breathe." My sister appears out of nowhere and hits his head and he flings her against the window ledge. She is 3 and she hits her head hard. I'm crying while hitting him. The police come through and arrest my father. My mom is now sitting up and her face is red and her eyes red. I looked at her for so long with sad eyes and a pleading heart that this was a dream. I felt so much pain and confusion that my brother came in the room and carried me and my sister into his room. He is 10 years old but he is really mature and seems used to it. Mom is talking to the police officer and I see dad in the police car handcuffed. My brother wipe my tears and helps my sister calm down. I hurt so badly and just want mom but she is still talking to the police officer. When they leave, mom goes to the bathroom to fix her eyes so that they are now white again but her face looks drained. We all sleep with mom that night because we are all scared of the devil to come back home and scare us. 

*****Present Day****

Back then I did not know that day would change my life forever. That day marked the day I lost my innocence and the day i remembered so much that it would eventually begin to destroy me. It was the turning point for me, devil, and angel. Everything after that day was hell. 

Author's Note

please give me reviews. I have never written my life and now I want to share it. Please give me feedback if it was hard to understand

Reviews

[Sir_Anonymous]

This is a tad disheartening to hear but I am glad to see you vent.

Keeping this type of emotion bottled up inside can only cause us to make bad decisions and I'm not going to say that you were in the wrong with wanting to take your life

... I too have once tried, but I hope that you've found something, anything just a significant reason to continue to fight the pain in living rather than taking the easy way out.

You are too young to feel this defeated don't worry about what other's may think just do what makes YOU happy and drown out the rest try to not let the outside change who you are on the inside.

There is beauty in your writing be proud that you have taken a step most do not in fear of them not being heard or unwanted by others.

You are strong and you have more than enough room to improve.

Sincerely, Your Friend Sir_Anonymous