My Vice

It's about poetry being one of my vices

Sombody please!
Take me a way
Take me to a place
That is better than today?
Where happiness lingers
And keeps me optimistic
Cause i can't figure out what is wrong
What is it!?
What is keeping me so locked up inside?
Today was the kind of day i felt like just dying!
But now i have finally found something to relieve
My stress to the world, it's called poetry

Reviews

[Infurno-Blaze]

beautiful work.

[Infurno-Blaze]

beautiful work.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Sounds like my kind of day, beautifully written full of pain and torment.

[Tracey C.]

Haha. I'm happy i'm not alone. And thank you!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

Where happiness lingers
And keeps me optimistic.
Magical lines...:)

[Tracey C.]

Thank you! Glad you like those lines! =)

[Sami Khalil]

A lot...:)

[InsanityWriter]

This is great. :) The last couple lines were my favorite. ^_^ Nice job!!

[Tracey C.]

Thank you! I'm glad you like this one ^_^