Keep Strong

It's about not losing hope, and 'staying strong'

Note to myself
I can get through this storm
With an umbrella above
And a coat to keep warm
Although it is windy
I'll stay on this path
My heart is much bigger
I won't crumble or snap
I vow to keep strong
'Til the day that I am dead
For the storm that has come
Are just thoughts in my head

Reviews

[conversations with her ..]

yeah this was nice...

honestly great work

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review some of my poems!

[InsanityWriter]

Ooh! Symbolism. ;) I seriously loved this write. :D Spectacularly penned!! ^_^

[Tracey C.]

Thank youuu! ;) Very much

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh I love this, the storm in your head, maybe the same as the storm in mine. Great poem.

[Tracey C.]

Thank You =D I hope you can get through it!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Yeah always do. Hope you do too :)

[Tracey C.]

That's great, I do also!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Awesome :)

[plainme]

Wonderful piece of writing, so true and straight, yet the storm can be interpreted in many ways ..

[Tracey C.]

Thank you! Very much!

[Zachary_James]

Really like this.

[Tracey C.]

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

[Sami Khalil]

Although it is windy
I'll stay on this path
My heart is much bigger
I won't crumble or snap.
Words of wisdom. Well written...:)

[Tracey C.]

Thank you my friend!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...