The Mourning Arises

It's a post-death poem

What lies behind these eyes
is a secret kept 'til my demise
When i'm sewn up, flushed and still
Remember my voice
'cause it gives you chills
A haunting day
With a parade of black
To reassure my lifes contract
With death himself as he lurks about,
He touches you all to take you out
So reap what i sew, or sew what i've reaped
My thoughts have been in hiding
But it's up to you to seek

Reviews

[CreativeStroke]

Beautiful mystery behind this piece and I really enjoyed it!

[Tracey C.]

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoy it =)

[Kelley Quinn]

I love the flow of it! Great job, honestly.

[Tracey C.]

Thank you very much! I am happy you like it =D

[Tasha]

Dark and mysterious...great write!
~Tasha

[Tracey C.]

Thanks! Hope you enjoyed it! =)

[Tasha]

You're welcome I did =]

[Vanessa van Gersie]

i really like this poem.it's dark and mysterious... great poem.

[Tracey C.]

Thank you, I am glad you like it. =)

[Vanessa van Gersie]

:) You are welcome

[Carolann Dowsett]

oooo this is a bit creepy and mysterious. I like this a lot. But now I want to know your secret that lies behind your eyes :) Nicely written.

[Tracey C.]

Thank you! I like to make things mysterious =) And you may never know xD

[Carolann Dowsett]

Haha true. Well it was a good read.

[Tracey C.]

Thanks you!

[black.butterfly]

It flows nicely. i like it.

[Tracey C.]

Thank you, very much!

[Sami Khalil]

A I like this poem especially the ending...:)

[Tracey C.]

Thank You! Much Appreciated!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...

[InsanityWriter]

Awesome poem, once again. ;) The flow and word choice were excellent! (:

100/100

[Tracey C.]

why thank you ;D

[AK]

Wow! Great poem :) I love the way you've portrayed these emotions! Your choice of words is exquisite. Keep writing!

[Tracey C.]

Thank you very much =) I appreciate your review.

[AK]

:) my pleasure!