I want you

I want you

A Poem by Vivien Shapiro

I want to be the warm cup of coffee that touches your lips every cold morning,
I want to be the bar of soap that gets to feel every inch of your skin,

I want to be the song stuck in your head that you can’t stop humming,

I want to love you …

I want to feel your love…

I want to be loved...

© 2014 Vivien Shapiro


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I really like the first three lines, great analogies. Super good, and relatable, loved it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


You've got lots of emotions bunched up inside. This is a really good poem that expresses that. We all want to be loved. Great way to end it.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 16, 2014
Last Updated on August 16, 2014
Tags: Love, lust, poem

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Vivien Shapiro
Vivien Shapiro

Canada



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