my hidden heartbreak

my hidden heartbreak

A Poem by Vivien Shapiro
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it all happened so fast , he broke my heart

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June 21st 9am
 "I hope that when you’re with her you see me in the reflection of her eyes and I hope that when you kiss her you taste my lips and when you drive her home I hope you can’t get the thought of me out of your head and I hope that when she reaches for your hand it burns you a little because you remember the way I’d hold it when you cried I hope it hurts you when she slams the car door and doesn’t kiss your neck and I hope that for maybe just a second when you’re sitting there alone in the dark you remember how much you miss me and I hope you think I’m happy because I’m hoping that maybe one day I will be”

© 2014 Vivien Shapiro


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I love to come across something that speaks to me so much and this did. The recognition of this hurt me. Lovely piece of writing well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


Touching indeed...Bravo........................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vivien Shapiro

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome....:)........
This breaks my heart. :(

On the bright side, these moments inspire us to write and in my experience the sun follows shortly after the rain. The clouds will break.

Thank you for sharing this emotional piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vivien Shapiro

10 Years Ago

it broke my heart writing it, but i feel like a the same time i feel better putting it on paper, i g.. read more
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

It does help. I guess that's why we do it. :)
It's also comforting to know you're not alone, .. read more

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Added on June 22, 2014
Last Updated on June 25, 2014
Tags: love, heartbreak, sad, depressed, lonely

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Vivien Shapiro
Vivien Shapiro

Canada



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