Sad lonely and broken

I'm trying so hard to pretend I'm fine
While I'm helplessly wishing you were mine
I'm dying on the inside can't you
see
Now that you're gonna there's nothing but misery
And the tears having frozen on my face
I feel so cold in this empty space
It's so hard to forget the past
Memories of our last summer spin too fast
I still lie in bed longing for your tender touch
And those sweet lies that meant so much
I still remember your soft hair between my fingers
Now it's just sadness and darkness that lingers
Before I met you I was completely fine on my own
Now I'm scared of being left alone
Sometimes i find it hard to blame you for waking away
After all who in their right mind would want to stay

Reviews

[Vera Fnk]

It's a really nice poem! Loved it from the first sentence :)

[Matching Socks]

The sun can't shine when it's pouring rain.
But the rain has to blow through so our hearts and lives can make way for us to REALLY appreciate the good.
I felt your words, good writing.

[Vivien Shapiro]

aw thank you so much :) means a lot