Shattered

Shattered

A Poem by MysteriousAries

Can't dream a lovely scene,

When the heart is broken.

Light was dim, grass not green,

The bolt of grief was open.


The lullaby sang,

Killed the rainbow.

Noah's rain, flooded pain,

A desperate tomorrow.


Can't paint a flamboyant view,

My muse is dead.

Lovely rose, heaven knows,

Now, I will paint death instead...


5-12-2016 @ 9:15 PM

© 2017 MysteriousAries


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ay!! pilipino po kayo? hello po...nice poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


It takes courage to see beauty in sadness. Well done kabayan!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Heart breaking words. The pain jumps off the page. Powerful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


So expressive phrases....Loved it..

Posted 7 Years Ago


the flip side of love,lovely

Posted 7 Years Ago


MysteriousAries

7 Years Ago

Indeed, Thank You...
I almost cried and just went through it again

Posted 7 Years Ago


MysteriousAries

7 Years Ago

I'm sorry to hear that... Glad you've felt the emotion of the piece... Thank You...
This made me sad....
but made me smile too, to see how good you can write

Posted 7 Years Ago


MysteriousAries

7 Years Ago

thank you...
Sad picture is written within the words.Wonderful expression to interpret sadness;-]

Posted 7 Years Ago


MysteriousAries

7 Years Ago

So true... Thank you...
What do you think about my work? Love to hear from you guys... Thanks...

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on June 13, 2017
Last Updated on June 13, 2017
Tags: love, hurts, pain, death, broken, grief

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MysteriousAries
MysteriousAries

Philippines



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I am Frederick B. Espiritu, 38 from the Philippines. I love to express my self, and I've found poetry as the best medium for me to shout. To share my dreams, failures, happiness and beyond. "Poems .. more..

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