Summer

Haiku

 

Summer sun and easy minds

Chills down my spine reflections of life

Sun kisses caressing my lips

Reviews

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[artguy]

Love sunny days

[Coyote Poetry]

A sunny day can bring joy even to a sad heart. A excellent poem. You said it all in so few words.
Coyote

[emmajoy]

'Sun kisses caressing my lips' - that suggests warm or even hot kisses.. the phrase certainly suggests heat - as it's supposed to! You have a quite distinctive style: you choose your words carefully, juggle them and then, create little gems.

Thank you for sharing.

[Laura E. Aranda]

Haiku Style
The crazy lips and then the contrasting daisies were kinda odd at first but i liked the haiku

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Summer's sensual sizzles; easy going, yet hot. A lovely little poem.

[Nicholas Hallows]

Summer sun and easy minds - I really like this calm summer feeling.
To be a haiku though the poem should have 5 syllables in the first and last lines and 7 in the middle line (as far as I am aware - unless translated directly from Japanese).
It's still a very nice poem though and conveys the mind-easing summer sun very well.
NH