Time is a Burden

Time is a burden, that is what I believe, I wish that time would just stop. Being with the one you love most and spending your life with them, you will truly realize that time only gets in the way. Humans were born to love, but also to die once the right time has come; only if time would stop, then you will be able to stay with your lover for eternity. The time that you have lived so far, you'll remember it again and again... wishing that you could live on to love that special someone...

Author's Note

I like writing short stories but my English tends to slack off a bit. If you don't mind i would some feedback on how to improve my English. Thank you very much and thanks for reading!

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Hi Sakuya,
I just came to look in and found this great story on time. This is a concept that has always fascinated me and I found your thoughts very well expressed. Your English was more than adequate while expressing your views on the limitations time sets on us mortals. So, all you need is to keep writing and you will feel so good about it, soon.

[Sakuya Ashiro]

Thank you for the great feedback. So glad that you liked it!

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome, it's a pleasure.