Dross of Plastic

Dross of Plastic

A Poem by Sia Khan
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Pollution won't spare anyone...not even love :(

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Love tales will stay immortal under the dross of plastic piles
of this universe that's brawling to breathe against polluters' stroke
Perhaps 'twill die; be smothered by the billows of black smoke
Pollution can devour everything and burp!!

© 2018 Sia Khan


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Thoughtful and interesting read. That has heart and a passion that speak volumes. Nicely expressed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sia Khan

6 Years Ago

Thank you Dawn! Am glad to hear your words :)
I enjoyed and appreciated this piece. You nailed the feeling of smothering and suffocation. The passion shines through it all. Nice job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sia Khan

6 Years Ago

Am really happy to hear your words. Thanks so much dear Traveler!!
The last line is abrupt to an otherwise thoughfull writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sia Khan

6 Years Ago

Thoughtful?
I thank you for your kind words dear Vivian :)
Vivian Gospel

6 Years Ago

You are welcome plastic doll.
I agree with you! Have you read the book FLOOD? Or THE ROAD by Cormac McCarthy? Then you have Stephen King's THE STAND...in that one it's a disease that decimates the world...man made, of course--Captain Tripp's.
There are any number of horrible possibilities.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sia Khan

6 Years Ago

Unfortunately I didn't read any of 'em but would like to obviously.
Thanks for the kind words.. read more
angel

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome.
Nice to meet you, Sia,welcome!
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This one's wonderful Sia...indeed pollution is guzzling everything including love!
Thanks for sharing this one :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sia Khan

6 Years Ago

Thank you Tahsin :)
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6 Years Ago

Welcome :)
This is intense!!! And it warns of the dangers that lie ahead. And how the world is being swallowed up. Nice description used

Posted 6 Years Ago


LazerRays

6 Years Ago

Accidental commeting haha- she commented on mine instead of hers XD haha
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6 Years Ago

That too a "Thanks giving" comment!...am confused..
sorry Sia..I'll watch out next time..ever.. read more
Sia Khan

6 Years Ago

Oh..it's ok! :)

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