First Steps

First Steps

A Poem by Mychaos

Children walk in, they shed a tear.
A new place! An unknown face,
But never fear.
Be my friend, til playtime's end,
We'll guide you dear.
Kindergarten, a small haven,
Until you leave here. 

© 2015 Mychaos


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Thank you, I didn't realise that!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is interesting, how you dumbed down the voice intentionally to give it that childlike feel, well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on July 22, 2015
Last Updated on July 22, 2015
Tags: kindergarten, children, poem, poetry, haven, tear, friend

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Mychaos
Mychaos

Budapest, Hungary



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