Them

A cute poem about a young man and young woman ^_^

Her goldy blonde hair

That rides the air

Her smooth rosy red lips

That shocks his fingertips

Her welcoming smile that greets him

Puts him in an everlasting daze

With his mind in a maze

 

His soft chiming voice

Makes her sure of her choice

His beautiful innocent green eyes

That makes her tender heart shy

His chivalrous and noble ways

Forces her mind to lay

And so she decides to stay

With him in an amotory gaze

Reviews

[TheBandit]

Shocks his fingertips is my favorite part
Usually a person extremely uninterested in poetry about love and relationships
But I read this
And it actually let me in a little bit, the command of language works well enough that I can enjoy it even
Well done