Puddle

Puddle

A Poem by My_Obsidian_Eye

wait for the clouds to come and clear
to rain new life upon the withering ground
so the flower can shine once again.

© 2015 My_Obsidian_Eye


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My_Obsidian_Eye
have not wrote anything for ages due to life being crazy as usual hope i can still so this.

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I already find puddles fascinating because, like an eternal 3 year old, I enjoy playing in them, but this was an interesting view of them. Looking at puddles as a sign of new beginnings and the good things yet to come is a thought that had never occurred to me before, but I do quite like it. I'll have to remember that next time it rains. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My_Obsidian_Eye

9 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it i am a bit rusty its been months since i wrote anything, but yes things are o.. read more



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I already find puddles fascinating because, like an eternal 3 year old, I enjoy playing in them, but this was an interesting view of them. Looking at puddles as a sign of new beginnings and the good things yet to come is a thought that had never occurred to me before, but I do quite like it. I'll have to remember that next time it rains. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My_Obsidian_Eye

9 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it i am a bit rusty its been months since i wrote anything, but yes things are o.. read more
Small puddles can bring to life such beautiful things :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My_Obsidian_Eye
My_Obsidian_Eye

shrewsbury, shropshire, United Kingdom



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If you are reading this you need to know you are beautiful! anyway stuff about me i guess :3 I am the vocalist/lyric writer for the band fallacy of faith(new band) and i write poetry etc mostly dark .. more..

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