Breakthrough

Short poem.

A rain drop fell onto my cheek, i looked up to the heavens crying and silently i realized i have never been so wrong about beauty.

Author's Note

any feed back is welcome

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

This is a great moment of reflection. To me also an awakening of sorts. For me it is so easy to be stuck in "Don't look down" mode or "Don't you allow anything that interferes" and sure one must right? otherwise you'll struggle to get something done but the mistake is that beauty passes you by and why woudn't it feel sad as it looks back at you thinking and wondering have you missed me?

Well you haven't here.

Great thoughts.

[My_Obsidian_Eye]

Thank you for understanding :3

[Another Relic]

There are some wonderful sights up there that can mesmerize the one who gazes. Your breakthrough has much merit.

[RayXor]

wow thats pretty damn deep for such few words thanks for sharing

[Sami Khalil]

A powerful realization. Bravo, sir...:)............................

[AprilRN1210]

nice little epiphany... short and sweet... as they are sometimes.. nicely done...