Ditto to ShannielleFaith's words. It is indeed a masterpiece. I am falling short of words to explain the beauty, and the hidden meaning these 20 words conveyed. The more you read, more questions pop up, and more thoughts clears up.
I agree with Creepy Swine Guy. You said it all with very few words, and I feel like it's really rare to come across writing like this these days. It's very relatable and open to interpretation. I love that. I actually don't even think I have the words or capacity right now to describe why I love this piece so much. It's just so simple but so strong. It lingers and has a new personal meaning each time I read it.
(I love how I say I don't have the words or capacity to explain myself, yet I try to explain myself anyway. Ha)
This is short, but written well. And it's relatable. I like it. I also think the font was a wise choice for this poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
actually, the font was rather chosen at random, but not that you mention it, it does sort of make se.. read moreactually, the font was rather chosen at random, but not that you mention it, it does sort of make sense
I cannot understand why this poem has no reviews. It is short, but crystal clear and hard hitting. It is the diametric opposite of so many of the long winded, unnecessarily wordy pieces the ramble for lines and lines and yet, say little.