Yin and Yang

a love poem.

To Yin,

To my heart, I must stay true,

Dear Yin, I have some words for you.

It’s meant to be Yin, you and me,

Together Yin, we’ll complete the dream.

I’m black Yin, you’re white,

I’m fear Yin, and you’re might.

I’m like the lyrics Yin, and you’re my muse.

You’re the one I love Yin; you’re the one I choose.

I’m a candle, and you’re the wick,

I make you burn and you make me tick.

Together we’re the perfect match,

Face it Yin, you are my catch.

Love, Yang

Author's Note

this was done as an assignment for my english class this year.

Reviews

[serpent]

an interesting write... the comparison between two parts of the same soul was indeed a refreshing thought..
nicely penned!

[CircusNerd]

This is an interesting concept, because most people use these to direct a relation in some situtation to them, not a situation within themselves. Adressing Yin and Yang as seperate entities is definitely quite unique and not at all what I was expecting, so kudos to that! However, in the following lines:

I’m black Yin, you’re white,

I’m fear Yin, and you’re might.

And no matter what Yin, we’ll always be tight.

you disrupt the flow of the poem, because each of the other rhymes flow in couplets. That is definitely the only suggestion I have for this piece. Stellar idea, and you definitely followed it through superbly :)