Courage

Just expressing my HATE ( =P ) for a certain BOY.

Upon this misunderstood battlefield he plays,

Every single god forsaken day,

He shakes his head in dismay,

And great amounts of power he contains,

Abilities to break hearts he has built from clay,

Ignorance is bliss, we portray,

But honesty, and truth, he slays,

And goodness and kindness he betrays,

Only hate and cowardice is displayed,

While he lives his life based on clichés,

Seeing the glass like faces he disarrays.

One day, One year, he will pay,

“I am sorry” he will say,

And his sincere courage he will attempt to portray,

While realizing, that this time, it will be too late.

 

Author's Note

Ehh this was written in a few short minutes, I don't feel its too good, but eh..lemme know what you think

Reviews

[Michael X]

wow, the presumptives of glory and you have captured the vision on full detail and all that implies the
scope of depth with the actual dynamic of the wording, absolutely captures the reader
with the first word and keeps us hanging on til the very end, you have a real gift, what I
admired is the passion and the perception of poetry. excellent job!

[Hannah Monttkomepy]

I think it's good actually. Ha ha. I sorta can feel the way you probably felt when you were writing this too. Good Job

[A]

WOW! I think it's amazing how you were able to rhyme everything with "plays." If I tried to do that, it just doesn't work. You did it great. Everything just flows together so clearly. Great poem! :)