Love to be Loved

I like how strong the finish was to this one, the rest was kind of bleh

how we love to be loved
we love to be special
in someones eye

how we need to be needed
how we love to be loved

yet when it is you who must love
it becomes too difficult
its too serious to be serious
how we love to be loved

I give and I give
and you give nothing
you don't and you wont
how we love to be loved

you'd leave me in a second
if I ever got mad
when you leave there is nothing left

I love to be loved
and I hate to be hated
but I will not allow
my heart to be traded

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A well-written poem...Bravo..........................