Opposites

Opposites

A Poem by MyOpenThirdEye
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I like this one simply because it was the first poem where the rhyme scheme seemed to flow nicely

"
you are a fly
I am a swatter
you are fire
I am water

I am dark
you are light
you are day
I am night

You are poison
I am antidote
you are will
I am won't

You are shallow
I am deep
you are level
I am steep

© 2014 MyOpenThirdEye


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MyOpenThirdEye
just a simple easy poem, I cut out the ending though

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Awesome. The rhyme scheme is very good. Overall well written

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on February 3, 2014
Last Updated on February 3, 2014
Tags: Entertaining, Simple, Beginnings

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MyOpenThirdEye
MyOpenThirdEye

New York City, NJ



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I'm getting back into writing after not really writing much in at least 2 years. Got over a lot of addictions, and now that I'm sober and healthy its time to get back to exercising the mind, and get i.. more..

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