We meet- We break

We meet- We break

A Poem by Aimee Mahathy
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just a tugging

"
I feel with a criminal's heart
To keep so silent
These emotions that are gnawing at the
Chains of my soul
Screaming-
Screaming
With their gas-masks strapped.

Trapped.
Exposed.

I want to live!
Unbind me so that
I can.

I speak
In honesty
And he lives
With the plastic covered
Ambitionists.

© 2011 Aimee Mahathy


Author's Note

Aimee Mahathy
I'm pretty drunk right now. I'll probably read this tomorrow and think "What the hell?" But at the moment, I know what I'm talking about.

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I think I can understand the state of mind at least. I felt like this last night after I went out with a few friends of mine. I love the line "I felt with a criminals heart." I think that it is really brilliant. I think the shorter lines add power to the message of the piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I think I can understand the state of mind at least. I felt like this last night after I went out with a few friends of mine. I love the line "I felt with a criminals heart." I think that it is really brilliant. I think the shorter lines add power to the message of the piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

your doing better than me I never remember what i say or do when i drink

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 16, 2011
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Aimee Mahathy
Aimee Mahathy

Bloomington, IL



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I'm 33 now, much more settled into myself, and getting back to it again. The previous about me is gonna stay for now, since it's still somewhat accurate and I need some time to figure out what to say .. more..

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