Tell Me, Gypsie

A haiku

 

Water drops on leaves,

Tiny litte crystal balls,

Where is my future?

Reviews

[X]

funny how you made 12 words pack such a great punch.
well done darling.
you have talent.

[Hollywood]

Very cute. :]

[cheeeeese]

I love this haiku, it's just perfect with the picture as well. Very beautiful piece, and I could think about this one for a while. Wonderful.

[Clockwork]

I love the picture that you paired with this piece. Your writing represents the image well. You follow the form and present a tiny snapshot of thought that is so much larger than what we see.

[R J Askew]

Title drew me into this. Like the verb and the notion of being a gypsie has a risque feel to it. And if I am not a gypsie I still like the word. I imagine about 10,000,000 kids out of a job, never having had a job wld feel just like this. Many for all kinds of other reasons. Sigh.

[Undying Glory]

a beautiful haiku i think. i've always admired haikus for their simplicity and sweetness. great