River Afternoon

River Afternoon

A Poem by Aimee Mahathy
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Haiku

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Among antique rock
The feathered one swims softly.
How far to dry land?

© 2009 Aimee Mahathy


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Awesome haiku which convey a simple but well thought idea
Nice work

Posted 14 Years Ago
What a wonderful haiku. Actually this could be considered a senryu because it displays action in the text. Great work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful haiku i must say...simple yet just so elegant

Posted 14 Years Ago

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 Added on November 29, 2009

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Aimee Mahathy
Aimee Mahathy

Bloomington, IL



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I'm 33 now, much more settled into myself, and getting back to it again. The previous about me is gonna stay for now, since it's still somewhat accurate and I need some time to figure out what to say .. more..

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