The Princess Walk

Keep your head high and you shoulders back, keep you face stoney, and your heart cracked

Walking like a Princess....
                             .....not an easy thing to do
Staying tall and mighty...

             ...but on the inside its and absolute zoo
...Keep your head high and you shoulders back
          ...graceful hands
...But not to much slack.
                         ...they Morph you
Mold you...

   ...Then someone new looks back through the mirror

...your crying but you don't shed a tear

Your slippers glimmer in, The others you pass

...You're Cinderella Right, but for some reason

  you end up walking on broken glass...

Reviews

[Sincerely Yours]

This is nice. you definitely get the feel of disorientation which you portray through your many different fonts and sizes. I feel the need to break free from the hands that try to mold me. I feel the need to escape the ones trying to hold me down. Learning that perfection without life is not perfection at all, but a half life. I think the piece is powerful. There are, however a few grammatical errors. Just make sure to proof read before you post. :) Well done other than that.

[TheLittleOne]

hahaa thanks(: I wrote this at 2 am and was to tired to adjust. Thanks for the awesome review!

[Sierra D3]

Wow. I got to say the different fonts really helped, set the mood and the feeling.
Really creative way to put this poem.

[Serenity Faith]

I love it! Just as the others say though, you do have a few grammatical errors, but many people usually do. As it stands in your poem...no one's perfect. Very well done, especially the way you changed your font around, to add impact.

[Becky]

I like it, but "your" should be "'you're" in the third and second to last lines. Other than that, I like it. Interesting poem. It has a powerful and emotional message.