How its Been ( Dear Adam)

Drawn to your senses

Drawn to your side

Equally carved rib, eye

Lessons learned. Memories burned

How Eve Of Me

Young

Should had cleaved to He

Tell me a phoenix can come back from the brink

Loved before I knew what love was 

this armor has a chink

Critical, your robed and crowned

Significant as Sappho sounds

Only one She 

the rest, fragments to weave

Stories create us 

Just for us,  I'll create an Eden

Author's Note

Any comment is appreciated

Reviews

[ayele marie dalmeida]

Some part romantic,some painful yet a beautiful piece :)

[Raymond Federle]

I couldn't have said it better than Sonnie and Paul, well done! :)

[sonnie ibadah]

"...Just for us, I'll create an Eden" very romantic!

[paul]

rhythmic , deep. i love the uneven rhyming

[BriBri]

Thank you very much