Years of Youth

Years of Youth

A Poem by BriBri

I wander the desert looking for desserts

Relationships are empty,a stunt purse

We grab a bottle, kill it, all re hearsed 

say I love you but the hate comes plenty

Even after we finish that Henny

elixir of life, give me a double shot

your eyes are barrels, but I’m quicker with the handle,

Years I’ve been dodging cupid’s arrow 

© 2013 BriBri


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

This is very, very good. You got talent. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BriBri

10 Years Ago

Thank you this is my first time posting poetry and love any critique and absolutely love any complim.. read more

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

190 Views
1 Review
Rating
Added on November 5, 2013
Last Updated on November 5, 2013

Author

BriBri
BriBri

Writing
Shur Shur

A Poem by BriBri


Cross street Cross street

A Poem by BriBri