Old Man Winter

Old Man Winter

A Poem by Dalaina Renee
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Brrrr....

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Why are you so grumpy,Old Man Winter?

With your winter winds blowing?

As you keep the snow flowing?

Why are you so grumpy,Old man winter?

All the animals go into hiding.

You keep the sun frome shining....

If you are as cold, as you make it for us outside....

I think you need a scarf.

And a safe place to stay warm inside.

Then would you be nice, to us Old man winter?

Bring some warmer weather.

Because,it is freezing out!!

© 2008 Dalaina Renee


Author's Note

Dalaina Renee
Not really sure if I liked this. Just messing around.

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Good poem,but I hate old man winter!! Yuck!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It doesn't snow where I come from but I wish it did.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We never get snow here! Your lucky!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is a cold.cold winter! Nice work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poor Old Man Winter! But, just think, without his snow we won't have the beauty of spring's flowing streams.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Welcome to my page! My name is, Dalaina Renee. I am a 32 yr old single mother of two little men. Whom I love with all of my heart. When I have free time I love to write. I love to write poems,short s.. more..

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