Make Up Your Mind About Me

Make Up Your Mind About Me

A Poem by Dalaina Renee
"

Just a song, I am messing around with.

"

First you like me,

then you don't.

Are you playing games with me?

 

First you call and now you

won't!

You are driving me crazey!

 

Why can't you make your mind up?

Why can't you make your mind up

about me?

You like to take your time, but

I might become someone else's baby.

 

We hang out, and then we don't.

Are we over now?

 

We kissed then we hugged.

Now we are strangers now.

 

Why can't you make your mind up?

Why can't you make your mind up about

me?

You like to take your time,

but times up.

I might become someone else's baby!

© 2008 Dalaina Renee


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I think you should already BE somebody else's baby;) Excellent piece you have shared here especially when it come to the roller coaster emotions this particular individual has you riding. Great expression of the uncertainity that lies within relationships, new or old.
Enjoyed this and certainly can relate too;)
Jazzy

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Lovely and well flowing poem...
Lots of feelings penned here....beautfully expressed..
THanks for sharing

Lynda

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now here's a poem I can truly relate to....wonderful write. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you should already BE somebody else's baby;) Excellent piece you have shared here especially when it come to the roller coaster emotions this particular individual has you riding. Great expression of the uncertainity that lies within relationships, new or old.
Enjoyed this and certainly can relate too;)
Jazzy

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem was so full of emotion. Even though this is about dating, I can relate to this poem in other ways with certain friends of mine.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ha! Become someone's elses elses baby! teach him a lesson! The first line grabbed me, I can so relate right now. What a great read!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Welcome to my page! My name is, Dalaina Renee. I am a 32 yr old single mother of two little men. Whom I love with all of my heart. When I have free time I love to write. I love to write poems,short s.. more..

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