Pop

Pop

A Poem by Dalaina Renee
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What Pop Does To You Later.....

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Pop

 

It comes in all flavors.

I love them all.

I dink each kind,

execpt diet not at all....

 

I am soon going to the beach.

Trying to loose weight.

I have a girlish figure to keep.

 

But pop is so fizzey.

Bubbley and good.

I am always craving one.

 

Pop goes to your hips.

Ands to your gut.

Before you know it you have a

extra large butt!

 

Just by a sip, or a slurp or too,

can add about another ten pounds on you.

Pop, should be right in front of the diet products.

To remind others that is causes big buttockes.

© 2008 Dalaina Renee


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Funny...I am still loling....

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lolz..! :D
this is great..though I never ever even tried to write something like this.....But I really loved this poem a lot...
Very much different and unique!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol i like light poetry like this. it's a nice piece, but you don't have to think too hard reading it. i liked it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haha this made me laugh. I like the lightness of it and you're right it does go straight to where you don't need it. Nice light piece.


Matalia

Posted 16 Years Ago


haha this is so cute

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Actually, you are right. Pop is so tempting..yet it's so bad for us. I think you captured that inner struggle that a lot of us pop drinkers deal with!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AHAH.. what a fun write this must have been!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Welcome to my page! My name is, Dalaina Renee. I am a 32 yr old single mother of two little men. Whom I love with all of my heart. When I have free time I love to write. I love to write poems,short s.. more..

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