Writer's Block

Writer's Block

A Poem by Dalaina Renee
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For All You Writer's Aching To Write And Can't Think Of A Good Idea!

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Writer's Block

 

Line after line as blank as can be.

What can I do, with no ideas to see.

The tv is on. The radio too.

I am soo bored, with nothing to do.

It's raining outside.

Like cats and dogs.

A twister went by.

And so did my neighbours pet hog.

But there's nothing to write about.

At least that I can see.

Just some blank lines are staring at me.'

What can I write about?

Besides, my old flame?

He's gotton kinda scarey, and his

drinking is lame.

He has a big gut now.

The hair has gone to his ears.

So, romance is out of the question,

sense I haven't had a date in a few years....

I do like adventure.

But what could it be.....

I saw a little green dude last night, he

was stuck in my tree.

Naw, he was just from out of town.

He's not that interesting.

He looked like a clown.

It was weird how he beemed up to his

jet plane.

I guess, all out of towners travle that way.

Nope nothing to write about.

I guess, that's it for today.

I'll just put my pen down.

And let my mind go astray.

Then maybe this writer's block will be over

soon.

Because, nothing happens around here.

Nothing exciting and new!

© 2008 Dalaina Renee


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It's a funny poem, when your'e about to read it, you don't think that it'll have a touch of humour to it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was definately better than my little poem *Gives you two thumbs up* I loved how you say you had nothing to write about, but took that and used it to your own advantage. Writing frustration usually makes that pesky block dissapear. Great job!

flame

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL I thought this was really cute, it has a ligh cheery feel.
Thanks for entering my contest and the best of luck.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Only a writer suffering a full block could sit through a storm and say they were bored with nothing to write about! Great stuff!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this one! made me laugh!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes! I could relate myself with it and that too very well...because I'm getting through it :(
Great way to describe a WB!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Writer's block! I think we all can relate to that.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I really liked this one. It's so cute!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Yup, I know what that's like and I hate it. There's a few spelling errors in this piece but it's still very nicely written. Great job!!!

Heather

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow it's cool that you wrote this through writers block
I wouldn't have the guts to even try
I love how it kept my attention all the way through =]
kudos

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Welcome to my page! My name is, Dalaina Renee. I am a 32 yr old single mother of two little men. Whom I love with all of my heart. When I have free time I love to write. I love to write poems,short s.. more..

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