Barely a Light

A sensual piece that I will keep adding to.

The room is dark with just enough light to see what needs to be discovered. Candles lit, incense burning. A sensual aroma of love and lust fills the air. You enter the room after preparing for what is about to come. Unaware of what I have only dreamed of I turn from my pillow. Barely a light behind you yet it captures your silhouette and my attention you have. I sit up in my bed and watch you walk to me. The closer you get to me I can see the secret that Victoria has been keeping for all these years has now been shared with your beauty.

What you have for me, what I have desired is hidden behind black and lace. Your hair is long and drapes around your angelic face. Your eyes dark and stare deep into my passion, reading every expression that comes from my body.

You stop at the edge of my bed. All I can do is stare, gaze at you, all that is heaven is standing before me and I have yet to touch what is...

You lean towards me and touch my face with the gentlest of such. When your skin meets mine my breath escapes me. You have scared the very soul from my body. You see the fright in my eyes, you lean in and whisper into my heart and say.....

...and you say "I want you". My heart stops and my skin grows cold.  You run your hand down my face through my neck and across the hair on my chest to my heart. You kiss me as if saying hello then pull back and look into my eyes. Your look tells me your words are more than true. You draw close, wet your lips and under your breath I hear you say "take me"...

Reviews

[Amaya Sullivan]

This is very interesting so far. I would keep writing leaving me at a cliffhanger here is not cool. So please, keep writing. This line kind of comical:

"The closer you get to me I can see the secret that Victoria has been keeping for all these years has now been shared with your beauty."

I chuckled a little after I read it. Everyone has to pick on Victoria and her "secret" when they refer to a negligee and such. Keep writing and its very interesting thus far!

[James Tincher]

i never thought of the "secret" line to be comical but after i read it again it does seem funny. : ) the rest of it is very graphic... ; ) thanks for your great comment... it made me laugh too...