Pickle

In spired by sitting on my couch wanting a dill pickle. I was to lazy to get up and get one. Then I heard a knock on my door, so I thought, I wonder if someone is selling them door to door.

One night as I was watching

my favorite show that makes

me laugh and giggle.  I heard

a knocking on my door, I

thought, could that be a pickle?

 

I arose from my couch and headed

to the door to see what this was

all about.  Looked through my peep

hole, saw what I saw and almost

let out a shout.

 

A little kid with blonde hair was

standing not too far, was tapping on

my chamber door, selling candy

bars.

 

With candy in hand and a determination

in his knock trying to raise money for

a purpose.  Nothing did I have to barter

with to make the o’ sweet purchase.

 

So, I returned to my couch and watched

the show that makes me laugh and

giggle.  Sad was I and almost cried

because I was hoping for a pickle.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Ha you must really love pickles! I had to read this one since the minions gave me the nickname pickles a while back, I have no clue why either, probably better not to know...entertaining read.

[James Tincher]

I'm glad you liked it. :)

[Holly Mason]

well dip it in chocolate then!!
this is adorable...
very descriptive piece a little blonde kid-hey when they are raising money they are determined he would of gone and gladly got you a pickle for the right price*)*)*)
had to read after that title and your words just made me smile
thank you for sharing

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

hahaha this made me laugh xD I like it. Dill pickles are awesome!

Good Job

[James Tincher]

Thanks... this is one of my favorites.