My Brand New Bleeding Paper Heart

My Brand New Bleeding Paper Heart

A Poem by Rosalie Barrows
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Love Poem

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Test my luck,

Stab my paper heart,

My paper heart will bleed

Bleed tears of joy,

Joy that IT will be the end.

Stab my pain away.

I love you

If you love me,

You will kill me

© 2008 Rosalie Barrows


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The ending works really well in this piece, saying if you love me you will kill me. A very thought provoking piece!

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is good, I've felt like this numerous of times.

Posted 16 Years Ago


"If you love me,
you will kill me"

Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

Its a lovely poem, the idea of a "Paper heart" is cleverly done.

I like it

Love,
Me

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Lia
Nice work. I know that feeling, but it seems so deep the way you've written in. Thanks xx

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 21, 2008

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Hello, My name is Laura. I'm 21 Years of age and a photographer. The poems I write are either from a broken heart to random. A dear friend told me once: "Don't take life serious. We are all going to.. more..

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