My Brand New Bleeding Paper Heart

Love Poem

Test my luck,

Stab my paper heart,

My paper heart will bleed

Bleed tears of joy,

Joy that IT will be the end.

Stab my pain away.

I love you

If you love me,

You will kill me

© 2008 Rosalie Barrows

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Captain Blackheart (The..

The ending works really well in this piece, saying if you love me you will kill me. A very thought provoking piece!

Posted 16 Years Ago

EnterUSerName

This is good, I've felt like this numerous of times.

Posted 16 Years Ago

forfila

"If you love me,
you will kill me"

Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

Its a lovely poem, the idea of a "Paper heart" is cleverly done.

I like it

Love,
Me

Posted 16 Years Ago

Lia	Nice work. I know that feeling, but it seems so deep the way you've written in. Thanks xx Posted 16 Years Ago Nice work. I know that feeling, but it seems so deep the way you've written in. Thanks xx Rating /100

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Added on February 21, 2008

Author

Rosalie Barrows

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About

Hello, My name is Laura. I'm 21 Years of age and a photographer. The poems I write are either from a broken heart to random. A dear friend told me once: "Don't take life serious. We are all going to.. more..